WORDS BOUND TOGETHER WITH TWINE/ THE SUNDAY WHIRL — P9OETS UNITED POETS PANTRY

WORDS BOUND TOGETHER WITH TWINE

On another day

In another time

Far away

Bones were stacked

Like cord wood

Tied with a skein

Of woolen yarn

The color red

 

The sound of a guitar

Floats above the sage

Joins the sound of church bells

That welcome the morning

A sweet refrain

 

On another day

In another time

Far away

We walked along the sea

Kicked sand

Collected shells

You would run to each shell

Bend down

Examine it carefully

 

Today, with the weight of the world

Upon us

We collect stones

Count shameful transgressions

Rest in the shade

Of our wig-wam

Bind words together with twine

 

August 5, 2018

Wordle 363

STILL LIFE/imaginary gardens with real toads

 

Still Life

 

Be she alive

Or be she dead

She sits

With her feet in water

As still as a stone

 

Does she speak…

What does she say…

Is it she who looks

At me

Or is it me

Looking at her

 

So is the still life

Still as a stone

Waiting

Waiting for you alone

 

Was she placed there

To celebrate the occasion…

And is now limp

And dying

For waiting

For you alone

 

The phone rings

She answers the phone

No longer the still life

She was originally

No longer dying

While waiting for you

 

August 3, 2018

 

 

 

DOPPLEGANGER/imaginary gardens with real toads

DOPPLEGANGER

One day

You brought a picture

That to you thought looked

Just like me

 

I kept it for a long time

And then it slipped

From my knowing

Did it really look like me

 

Or was it in your eyes

You could see

The face of a girl

That looked just like me

 

Each leaf on the tree

Is different

Yes, they all look

Like leaves

 

But still different

No one is really is

Just the same

As another

We are each unique

 

August 2, 2018

 

 

Bits of Inspiration ~ Doppleganger

Have you ever wondered if there is someone who looks just like you, but you’ve never met them? I’ve been told numerous times I have a twin. Well, not an actual genetic one, but someone who bears a strong resemblance. I’ve yet to meet my doppelganger.

 

Of course there are those distant relatives living and deceased who have marked resemblances to yourself or another family member. My youngest daughter, Carrie, bears an uncanny resemblance to Cher. There is a genetic connection because Cher’s mother and my father were distant cousins. Carrie doesn’t always look like Cher. It can come in the tilt of her head, a smile, or her theatrical ability to slip into a character.

 

 

Doppelganger literally means double walker. There have been numerous references to them throughout history. They have been referred to as ghosts or the speculation we humans are time travelers. In this picture my husband Charlie was eighteen years old on a family vacation. He is on the far left with a girl standing behind him. One day he was looking at the picture and called me to come look at it. We both agreed the girl standing behind him held an unsettling resemblance to Dawn when she was seventeen. Is it possible? Is he playing ping pong with his daughter who traveled back to the future?

 

 

For today’s challenge I want you to write about an encounter with your doppelganger/time traveler. It could be a painting, a photo album, a magazine, or face to face. Meet him/her in whatever circumstances your imagination creates. Please make sure it is a new poem, post it on Mr. Linky, and visit your fellow poets to discover their responses to their double walkers.

 

“A BUNDLE OF CONTRADICTIONS”/poets united midweek motif “a bundle of contradictions”

“A BUNDLE OF CONTRADICTIONS“

 

First, I say

I will

And then, I say

I won’t

 

Yes, sometimes

I am a bundle of contradictions

First, I think it is this way

Then, I think it is that

 

I say yes

And then I say no

Gathered into a bundle

Tied with a bow

 

Life is like that

So much is offered

We agree

…With careful consideration

Maybe not

 

What road to choose

The road least taken

Or the road

Worn and old

 

So many decisions

Never knowing

What is right

What is wrong

 

August 1, 2018

 

 

 

 

AUTUMN IN THE JEMEZ/imaginary gardens with real toads

AUTUMN IN THE JEMEZ

 

Yes, it was that day

The one we have

All been waiting for

A sweet day in autumn

 

We were hiking in the Jemez

In a canyon

With tall dried grasses

Suddenly we heard

Sounds bouncing

Off canyon walls

 

It was hard to tell

Where it was coming from

Soft hoots

Echoing back and forth

 

We hurried our steps

Was it up ahead

What was it

Then we saw the sandhill cranes

 

Making their migratory

Journey

To the Bosque

Later we were told

 

Because of the waves from

Los Alamos

The cranes get lost

They must circle several times

 

To find their way

It is true for humans too

Sometimes we must

Try more than once

To find our way

 

July 30, 2018

 

 

 

 

A DAY AT THE BEACH/the sunday whirl #362 poets united poets pantry imaginary gardens with real toads

A DAY AT THE BEACH

 

As I sat on the staircase

And dreamed myself away

Anywhere anytime

Somewhere else…

 

On the Texas coast

The Gulf of Mexico

Enchantment by the sea

We did not have to travel far

 

Volleyball in the sand

Just a little trip

Another world

Sand on the beach

 

Stretched as far as you could see

Waves rolled to the shore

To crash over you and me

A large picnic basket

 

And a blue ice chest

A day at the beach

What a gift it was

Take pictures of day

 

Memories stored deep in the heart

Would not soon fade away

The sun set in the west

A bonfire

 

To light up the beach

Soon it was time

To shake out the sand

Fold up the quilt

And return to our everyday

 

July 29, 2018

 

Wordle 362

 

 

THE BOY YOU WERE STRONG AND STRAIGHT/dVerse

THE BOY YOU WERE STRONG AND STRAIGHT

 

The leaves rustle

In the wind

Though this morning is quiet

Not a breath

The sky a forever blue

The blue of the uniform

 

Salute

Forward march

Like a shade drawn

Over the mountains

A lovely shade of orchid-blue

I remember the image of you

 

Strong and straight

A boy grown into a man

You walk away

Through the tall grass

Into forgotten yesterdays

 

July 20, 2018

 

 

WILDERNESS/poets united midweek motif/wilderness

WILDERNESS

Most of what was wild

Has been stamped out

Tamed

Controlled

 

Still I am told

There are wild things

Which brave the urban blight

Racoons

Snakes

Spiders

Rabbits

Coyote

All kinds of bugs

 

I am told there is one rat

For each citizen

In New York City

And of course

 

There are all kinds

Of wild things

Once called humans

Lose in the city

 

What is wild

Out of the ordinary

Those with a different point of view

Rare

Sacred

 

July 25, 2018

CHILD OF THE FOREST/imaginary gardens with real toads tuesday platform

CHILD OF THE FOREST

Deep within the forest

The path is obscured

By the pounding rain

Trapped by the canopy

 

Softly I call your name

Wait for your answer

Which comes to me

As pale as an echo

 

I listen to the forest sounds

Softly sliding down the hill

The rain refreshes the moment

The path appears

 

Before me

Deep within

The heart of the forest

You wait for me

 

July 21, 2018

dVerse

It is winter, no snow on the ground, as it rarely snowed on the Texas Coast, yet it was very cold. We drew our coats closer.  We entered the old farm house.  The wood stove in the kitchen was burning.  The room was a warm and cherry greeting for the new family. There were barns and sheds outside for the animals.  As you looked across the fields you could see forever.

 

In the large main room, I remember my older Sister studying by the light of an oil lamp.  I am guessing we didn’t have electricity yet.  There was a warmth in the room, the whole family gathered there.

 

I remember my Sister had a little pet turtle, a little green one.  And then he got lost, no one could find him.  We looked high and low.  Later when we moved to town, we found him, in the corner behind the bed.

 

In our new house in town, in the bedroom that I shared with my Sister, the wallpaper had little white lambs.  I remember my Father explaining to us, we were not to color the lambs, and we never did.

 

The cold wind blew-

In the outhouse

We found a snake

 

July 24, 2018

 

 

 

 

 

 

23MondayJul 2018

 

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Bear with me and please read my entire post here, even if you’ve done haibun many times before.

DID YOU KNOW?

** THE HAIBUN WAS ORIGINATED by 17th century Japanese poet Matsuo Basho, who often wrote haibun as travel accounts, the most famous of which is Oku no Hosomichi (Narrow Road to the Interior). 

** FIRST ANTHOLOGY OF ALL ENGLISH-LANGUAGE HAIBUN: Bruce Ross’s Journey to the Interior: American Versions of Haibun, published in 1998.

A HAIBUN IS: 1 or 2 short prose paragraphs followed by 1 haiku.

The PROSE PARAGRAPHS must be a true accounting, not fiction; not flash fiction.

The HAIKU, in the traditional manner, is trickier to me. Notice the musts below:

  • It must be nature based
  • It must be three lines(5-7-5 syllables OR short-long-short)
  • It must have a direct or subtle relationship to the prose paragraphs; enrich the prose without condensing the prose.
  • It must include a KIGO(word or phrase associated with a particular season). See suggestions below in section on the SAIJIKI.
  • Trickiest for me – although only 3 lines, a haiku must have two parts including a shift, an added insight. Japanese poets include a KIREJI(cutting word). BUT there’s no linguistic equivalent in the English language therefore punctuation creates the cut: a dash, comma, an ellipsis, an exclamation point. Sometimes it’s simply felt in the pacing or reading.

Japanese poets often use a SAIJIKI – a book like a dictionary or almanac for KIGO. Divided into the 4 seasons, it includes categories within each: earth, humanity, observances, animals and plants. I found this VERY HELPFUL!

For example, under SPRING KIGO you find words like warm (weather changes from cold to warm; water becomes warm); spring mist and spring haze. Under Animals: frogs (noted for their singing); skylarks (in flight); swallows, and twittering (singing of songbirds). Under Plants: blossoms, cherry blossom-viewingwildflowers.

In AUTUMN KIGO: full moon. Under Humanity: scarecrow. Observances: grave visiting. Animals: crickets. Plants: apples, persimmons, colored leaves.

In WINTER KIGO. Humanity: snow viewing, first snow, ice. Plants: fallen and dried leaves. New Year: first laughter.

In other words, you may or may not actually use the words summer, spring, winter, or autumn.

EXAMPLES OF HAIKU with a Kigo and a Kireji (added insight after a cut)

The crow has flown away:
swaying in the evening sun
a leafless tree.            
                      Natsume Soseki (186 –1916)

fresh snow on the mat –
the shape of welcome
still visible
                     Michael Dylan Welch

Nightfall
too dark to read the page,
too cold. 
                    Jack Kerouac

 Yuki Teikei Haiku Society’s Season Word List contains KIGO hints/words I found very helpful. 

So today,

**Let’s journey together into an interior. Go back in time to one of the very first houses you remember living in. Try to recall a room or place in that house. Take your mind around the room to see what details you can picture. Do you remember this room because of something that happened there…..or someone who habitually sat there?

**Your haibun will begin with 1 or 2 tight paragraphs of prose describing that room. Take us into its interior. It must be a true accounting; not fiction.

**Add a TRADITIONAL haiku. Follow the haiku musts given above. If you just skipped down the post to read this prompt, go back up to read the musts for a haiku – and the section on the SAIJIKI. Let’s try our hand at a traditional haiku!

I’ve always said, I learn so much at dVerse! I love its camaraderie in the writing, learning, and appreciation of everyone’s posts. 


I look forward to, in the words of Bruce Ross, your Journey to the Interior – and seeing how traditional you can be with the haiku portion of your haibun!