Sunday Whirl #66
The Melancholy Painter
Swinging the loaded brush with abandon
Mixing the powdered colors
Rosy red
The blood on which she stands
Pale gold the accumulation of years
The pigment covers the plane
Stray drops spray
As she flings the paint
Erotically touching
The tips of green grass
The picture in her mind’s eye
Emerges
Image from the internet.
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The Mag #127
The Letter
The shadow of your dark image
Crosses before me
The message you have brought
Is BIG
Meaningful
Powerful
You speak to me as only you can
I reach into the dark
Touch your extended fingers
Know you are there
Without fear
I continue the journey
Without map
Strain to see the “way”
Yet you have told me
You are with me
I am not alone
annellannell 
Oh to harness that ‘energy’ and make the images trigger emotions – this is what you have done. Flung the wordles and energize us all.
Thanks for your visit.
Thanks for your comments! Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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Loved both of these. They both have that deep sadness and yet, the colours in the first are so vibrant, rich. The second one is poignant and, heartfelt. Both have such lovely imagery.
You have read my words perfectly, did the deep sadness come from the title of my first piece? Or was it woven into the piece? Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
annell@taosnet.com http://www.annelllivingston.com http://www.somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com https://annellannell.wordpress.com
I like the meaningful message and comfort of the second poem ~
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/07/in-figures.html
Such a lovely contrast going from the vibrant colors of your first piece to the abstract of the second. I enjoyed both of them, they go so well together.
Thanks for your comment Laurie, I think perhaps it says just where I am…at this moment. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
annell@taosnet.com http://www.annelllivingston.com http://www.somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com https://annellannell.wordpress.com
There is a vivid blend of excitement and sadness in The Melancholy Painter. I find the description of the colors entrancing.
love the reassurance that you are not alone…that def goes a ways in a world we traverse without a map….and i like the sexuality you bring out in the creative moment you capture inthe first annell…
I really like the contrast of the two here, and I like the symbolism of the second.
Very well wordled. I wouldn’t have thought of using a painter but it works so well. I love seeing the different things we all see in the same set of words.
There was a change in pace..from red to black..as if she felt the paint and the marks..putting what’s inside..out..spilling her heart perhaps? jae
We read to know we are not alone…
I love the wordle piece, Annell. Your Mag is powerful. The ending is so strong…. Well done.
There is a fine line of balance between the two pieces, which may say much about the ‘place you are in’. We are never only one dimensional, but carry within us the entire spectrum of all that we have experienced. Definitely like that realization that you are not alone that concludes and somehow bridges the two pieces, Annell. Wonderful work again, my friend,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/07/22/poetic-distractions/
The compliments and contrasts here are colored with lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing, Annell.
There is always the feeling that our loved ones are always by our side spiritually. It gives us courage to venture into the unknown. Great thoughts, Annell!
Hank
the message made me think how this looks like Chinese lettering is that what you meant?
dark feathers dead crows
I enjoyed reading both of these Annelle.
loving both of these… awesome write!
JJRod’z
Thanks you for your comment. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
annell@taosnet.com http://www.annelllivingston.com http://www.somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com https://annellannell.wordpress.com
I love the Expressionist use of colors in the art process described, Annell.
You have the artist’s vision and it shows in your poem, Annell. Beautiful.
Pamela
The first poem attracted me and the second one touched me…
Really enjoyed both of them…
I loved both poems, Annell, but the second is especially moving. How lovely.
Thanks for your comments Sherry! Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
annell@taosnet.com http://www.annelllivingston.com http://www.somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com https://annellannell.wordpress.com
So lovely, and hoping they will be joined together, and not ever feel alone….
I wanted to go to your site? Can you help me? Thanks for your comment. It is the realization that it is true.
Ah strong contact with the Plutocrat , i like
the words of an artist…nicely done….and thanks for sharing
wonderful poem
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