Sunday Whirl #55
Cinco de Mayo Moon
Honor the day
It was no chance glance
Into last night’s dark cobalt sky
You emerging upon the scene
Gently touching the guitar strings
The night was clear
Nothing separated us
Our hearts aligned
You winked at me
Set the hook
My heart vibrated in your glow
Sang your song
You imprinted your shiny face
On my heart
My feet moved to the music
You erased the day’s grind
Contrasted a new way
You are so much more
Than a tiny dot in
The Universe of stars
A lovely story, but the last three lines are wonderful. I love that everything leads to that.
Yes indeed. Lovely imagery. So many of us love the moon and are influenced by her too. Great wordle.
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I love the last three lines, too, Annell. This is an excellent write.
a magnificent story. memorable last lines. and wonderful use of the prompt-words.
Best, M.
Beautiful, Annell. This is one of my favorites of your poems…and yes, the last three lines are beautiful!
I love this, especially the closing lines. Beautiful!
I love this, Annell. The moon really was beautiful last night.
Great tribute Annell. No matter her age, she will always hold a deep level of fascination. Your concluding lines say it all,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/05/06/still-possibilities/
What Margo said.
Beautiful, flowing imagery, sexy, moon, powerful, wonderful message.
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A big star in the universe..not a tiny dot..I like that..I love the symmetry of numbers also 5/5..not that we celebrate the 5th May here..these words tripped and danced..like love..Jae
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My sister is on the way… she’ll be here later today….
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