Monarch Butterflies migrating to Mexico
Sunday Whirl Wordle #47
A Day Like Any Other Day
Or so it seemed
No accident
All was deliberate
The day was intently charged
Even the pouring of the libation
There was to be a sacrifice
We gathered to settle
Still there was confusion
In a clear voice
The question asked
There would be no trouble between us
A toll was charged
We each would pay
Handle our grief alone
Our sorrow could be felt on Mars
Each was intent on the needs of my Mother
When the last breath was taken
We became as robots
We were ready
Each task was completed as planned
Then we parted
We took our grief home
In the days that followed
There would be plenty of time to sort the loss
Note: It was November 14th, 2011, in Texas, the day I arrived. I took the picture of the butterflies on the loquot tree in my Mother’s front yard. My Mother was dying, I saw the butterflies getting the last of the necture before their journey, they still had a long way to go, and so did we. My family gathered, and long we had spoken of the way we only used polite conversation, the difficulty we seemed to have with the “truth.” That was all gone, at last we could be honest with each other. It seemed each one there, was blessed and more beautiful that ever before.
What a loving, beautiful and inspiring passage you and your family have made through this experience, Annell. Truly, you are a wonder – such grace and dignity. I love that, as you accompanied your mother through this passage, your family was able to talk about what was real.
Yes,, if anything will do it, “death is the ticket”, when it comes to” get real.” Interesting, as we step into the “light” all is beautiful! Thank you Sherry for your comment.
Hope you are feeling OK today. Hope today will be easy, not too much to do. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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Dear Annell,
I was overwhelmed with your poem today and the words following the poem. Why is it so difficult to ‘speak the truth’ among family members? Glad you were finally able to.
I am so sorry about your mother, annell, but remember from when my father died, how comforting being able to write about it was for me. Amazing how well the wordle words work. I particularly like the last three lines, what they express and how you express them.
I hope you are having a quiet weekend.
margo
Thank you for your comments. Did you find my question? I wondered are you supposed to use the wordle words in their original form? Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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Hmmm. I answered your question, at least I thought I did, but I’ll answer here to make sure: When I began writing wordles I used the words in whatever form, but learned that for the real challenge, the words should be used exactly as they come. I balked at first, but now find it great fun to use them unaltered. However, more important is that you have fun, so it depends, in the end, on that.
When death comes, one can only speak the truth. Death allows nothing less. It is nice that you were all together and experienced this. Your mother would have been / must have been pleased.
Yes, Mary, that was what I was getting at! Thanks so much for your comment. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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To find colour and life after such a loss is admirable..being able to speak the truth seems like a certain peace and order..perhaps which the gravity of ceremony cannot enable..Jae
What a beautiful comment! Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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My father passed more than 10 years now. I can see us all there still, trying to talk and support each other in his last days and hours. I too wrote for him and read to him – though I knew he could not reply. May all your memories of your mother be for blessings.
Thank you so much for your response. My Mother was such a blessing, therefore I was truly blessed. I will miss her everyday. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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Annell, this is so sad. I can feel your pain when reading it. I know what you are going through. I lost my mother a few years back.
Pamela
Thanks for your response. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
annell@taosnet.com http://www.annelllivingston.com http://www.somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com https://annellannell.wordpress.com
reminds me a bit of the days following the death of my mother in law…one of the hardest experiences i have been through…
Thanks so much for your comment. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
annell@taosnet.com http://www.annelllivingston.com http://www.somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com https://annellannell.wordpress.com
What a wonderful blessing to be able to speak the truth. I hope all your memories of your mother are pleasant. I found after my father passed I dwelt on the fond memories when there were plenty of unpleasant memories I could have recalled. He passed suddenly and took a lot of the truth with him.
Your paragraph explaining the circumstances surrounding this poem are both poignant and powerful. May the memories (and photo) of the butterflies sustain you as you continue your journey through loss and grief.
Six-Word Whirl
It is interesting what sustains us during times that can be described as “hard.” I also found it interesting how we went into action, at my Mother’s last breath. It was a plan, even though we didn’t realize… Thank you for your comments. Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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Annell, This piece covers me in sadness. It is beautifully written.
I am struggling right now with words. But thank you for your comment. Since I received the early words, they would not come together… I prepared a list…? Is a list a poem? Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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