Sunday Wordle #45
I spread the map before me
Search for answers
My mind strays
Reluctant to stay on course
Senses hear the murmur
From the cemented crypt
Entranced by the sound
I move through the dense smoke
You are there
You smile
Your pelt glistens
Meetings with the dead
Can be cumbersome
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This made me smile big, Annell. A great ending to a rather mysterious start. 🙂 I love it.
You are on a run with your endings pulling us up short, when we thought we had the path. I love those last two lines.
Thanks Mago, and that is also how I felt about the word of your piece… Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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Meetings with the dead… Yikes!
Lovely wordle.
Oh, the glistening pelt and meetings with the dead. I saw Pup, of course.
…and I knew you would, I think I did, too. Thank you Sherry! Annell Livingston HC 74 Box 21860 El Prado, NM 87529
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Annell, it did have a mysterious start. I was, at first, thinking of an Indiana Jones type character, and then the ending was so different. A pleasant surprise. I love “your pelt glistens”.
Richard
Up, down, roller coaster poem: very good wordling.
Annell, this poem resonates wth me… indeed meetings with the dead can be cumbersome…but the smile is worth it!
Oh – this was lovely and while it reminded Sherry of Pup, it also kinda reminded me of my own poem, The Lone Wolf … amazing how sometimes minds run along the same tracks, yes? Very nice.
http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.com/2012/02/last-wolf.html
The first few lines had me expecting something entirely different from where the poem ended; I thought we were going to be talking about difficulties with staying on task or something similar. Projecting my own challenges onto the poem, I guess. 😉 Great use of the wordle and good job taking us in an unpredictable direction.
OOh, I really liked this one. Quite mysterious.