Sunday Whirl
I open the book
The perfect grey feather
Found waiting
Morning quiet
Light penetrates my permeable
The only sound
The echo of the beat of my heart
Before me the field is open
The earth still frozen
My bare feet feel the cold
I am startled by the serenity
After the anguish
Shock of loss
A new day is born
The air fresh
A tiny flame burns in the hearth
Beautiful word picture. Love the last three lines. As long as a tiny flame burns, there IS life and hope.
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This is so beautiful, Annell………the photo is so lovely, so peaceful……you made me feel the peace you were seeing and experiencing where you are. After tears and grief, even during tears and grief, there is still All That Is, all around. I LOVE your last line. SO MUCH!
A comforting resolution of the wordle.
I agree with Sherry. I felt such peace, then a little shake up and then the comfort and hope of the finish. Well done.
margo
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You have captured a beautiful moment in time with your words! This is so lovely, Annell!
Beautiful verse, Annell.
Pamela
nice! I love the soft flow of your stream of thought. alluring and hypnotic. Sweet!
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This is so beautiful and comforting, full of hope!
Annell, you are the second poet I’ve read who has juxtaposed “startled” and “serenity”; wish I had thought of that. I like the image at the end, of the flame in the hearth.
Richard