January 22, 2011 Sunday Whirl

Wordle  Sunday Whirl #40

Ashes and Red Out Poker

Small ashen clouds

Scattered in early morning sky

Like shards of tea leaves

Found in the bottom of a cup

Whisper hopes and dreams

Of young girls

Telling stories

Sisters with a knack

For charming lies

Scalding the heart

Of a young lover

Crush the instinct

For carnal urges

12 thoughts on “January 22, 2011 Sunday Whirl

  1. Neatly turned. None of them sound forced. I especially like “shards” used with tea leaves. (you might even leave out the “tea” in the next line, since it’s so concise)

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