A Stone: One Daily Observation
In the evening when the world
Settles down to rest
The sun sets in the west
In the morning
The sun peaks up
Over the mountains
It will be a beautiful day today
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- Six Word Saturday
Crafted by hand
In the autumn
(With the help of others)
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dVerse:prompt Train
Train Going No Where
Thoughts linked together
Chugging down the track
Clickity Clack/ Clickity Clack
Chiaroscuro
Light into dark and back again
Sun Breaks Through thick clouds
Bright mood sustained
Clickity Clack/ Clickity Clack
Soft kitten
Sits by the door
Asks to come in
Clickity Clack/ Clickity Clack
End of day
Consumed by your gaze
Rocked by your words
Safe in your arms
Clickity Clack/Clickity Clack
annellannell 
I LOVE your six words!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wonderful! And yes, it will be a wonderful day!
i hope that you get that beautiful day today annell…smiles.
nice…swung back thrufrom dverse…love your play onthe sounds of the train…the little kitty…safe in your arms…very nice feel to it…
rocked in your words, safe in your arms…i always felt safe when sleeping on train rides…but i know you’re not really talking train rides here….very nice annell..
wow, how cool is that. thanks for sharing.
a marvelous feeling of clarity and life as seen thru your poetic lens – activating the rythmns only heightens the experience – and expands the readers enjoyment
A delightful array you have blessed us with today. I like all three… especially the clickey-clack.
clickity clack….I adore the repition…brilliant
I like “clickity clack.” That sound / those words IS very relaxing…as is your poem, Annell. Like a lullaby really.
Life neatly cargoed in the boxcars of your stanzas, pulled along clickety clack, and sometimes by going nowhere we go everywhere. Lovely, annell, as always lots of the visual in this.
very nicely done! I hope it was wonderful day for you; visiting from 6-word Saturday. I hope tomorrow is equally as nice!
betty
A poem as smooth as a train ride. Gorgeous. Thank you.
Such a smooth journey down the tracks. Beautiful.